Head seems a little too far forwards. The perspective on the face seems off, the eye looks like it might be responsible by being a bit too wide, but I'm not positive. Muzzle could probably fill out a little lower out the front than it is, if the head is meant to be sideways to where it's being viewed from. Her left knee is a little lower than her right knee. Her chest seems to be higher on the left than it is on the right, specifically her breast (it should be the same height because the shoulders are at the same level, she's not slanted.)
That's what I spotted. Also, that facial expression is really good, gives a sense of longing as is she is thinking about another time and place.
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From today, you can call this place... Outer Heaven.
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